JARGALSAIKHAN, C. Návrh podnikatelského plánu pro vznik a rozvoj společnosti [online]. Brno: Vysoké učení technické v Brně. Fakulta podnikatelská. 2023.
The aim of final thesis was completed at a good level. There are some issues that occured in processing of the work and descreased the overall quality of this thesis. The sources on which is above all the theoretical part based could be more recent and some of them are rather popular, however for this chosen topic can be seen relevant. Used methods were appropriately selected, however their implementation evinces some limitations (e.g. with regard to the aim of the final thesis, the selected methods should be described more in detail and in context of solved issue, statistical processing of the gained data is not stated at all and interpretentions and some conclusions are superficial and not supported with serious data). Proposals and recommendations for the company development could be designed in more detailed way with relevant justification (e.g. there are no financial reports, calculations could be more precise including taxes and other relevant costs, some of the necessary costs are not taken into account at all - e.g. remmunaration in the form e.g. payroll calculations covering health insurance, social contributions and tax. Formal processing of the thesis is on a good level, there are some rather small issues that should be noticed, e.g. spelling mistakes, missing quotations in the text or inconsistency in a format of references.
| Kritérium | Známka | Body | Slovní hodnocení |
|---|---|---|---|
| Splnění stanovených cílů | C | ||
| Zvolený postup řešení, adekvátnost použitých metod | B | ||
| Schopnost interpretovat dosažené výsledky a vyvozovat z nich závěry | C | ||
| Praktická využitelnost výsledků | C | ||
| Uspořádání práce, formální náležitosti, použitá terminologie a odborná jazyková úroveň | B | ||
| Práce s informačními zdroji, včetně citací | B |
This bachelor's thesis presents a comprehensive exploration of designing a business plan for a company specializing in CBD-containing products. The company's primary distribution channel will be through e-commerce. The thesis includes analysis of the competitive landscape, recognizing potential threats that could negatively affect the business's performance and growth. A unique aspect of this thesis is the analysis of social factors, that are relevant in the context of CBD products.I would like to recommend this thesis for defense with a grade of 'C'.Question:How would the company react to a potential ban on the sale of products containing CBD?
| Kritérium | Známka | Body | Slovní hodnocení |
|---|---|---|---|
| Splnění stanovených cílů | B | ||
| Zvolený postup řešení, adekvátnost použitých metod | C | ||
| Schopnost interpretovat dosažené výsledky a vyvozovat z nich závěry | C | ||
| Praktická využitelnost výsledků | D | ||
| Struktura práce, použitá terminologie a odborná jazyková úroveň | B | ||
| Práce s informačními zdroji | B |
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