ADEGBE, E. Podnikatelský plán pro podnik s udržitelnou módou [online]. Brno: Vysoké učení technické v Brně. Fakulta podnikatelská. 2025.
The thesis is of a very good standard, which is also reflected in my evaluation.
| Kritérium | Známka | Body | Slovní hodnocení |
|---|---|---|---|
| Splnění stanovených cílů | A | The aims and scope of the thesis are correct. The objectives build on each other and form a coherent structure. | |
| Zvolený postup řešení, adekvátnost použitých metod | B | The chosen methods are well chosen with respect to the focus of the work. In some parts I would have appreciated a deeper analysis, but overall the methods are chosen adequately. | |
| Schopnost interpretovat dosažené výsledky a vyvozovat z nich závěry | B | On the basis of the analyses performed, the author properly interprets the observed data and draws appropriate conclusions from these results, which are a suitable basis for the design part. | |
| Praktická využitelnost výsledků | A | Considering the fact that the author of the thesis implements these proposals in her home country, the proposals are justified and supported by practical implementation. | |
| Uspořádání práce, formální náležitosti, použitá terminologie a odborná jazyková úroveň | B | The thesis meets the requirements for a thesis. I have no major comments. | |
| Práce s informačními zdroji, včetně citací | B | The sources used are duly cited by the author. However, I would have liked to see more critical evaluation of the literature used in the theoretical part. |
This is a very good diploma thesis. The thesis contains some parts that are applicable in practice. Based on the evaluation, I recommend the thesis for defense before a state commission.
| Kritérium | Známka | Body | Slovní hodnocení |
|---|---|---|---|
| Splnění stanovených cílů | A | The main objective of diploma thesis is to develop a business plan for an existing fashion business in Nigeria. The objectives of the diploma thesis are set in line with those of a master's thesis. After studying the thesis, I can state that the objectives of the thesis have been met. | |
| Zvolený postup řešení, adekvátnost použitých metod | B | The procedures used in the thesis are correct. The structure of the work corresponds to the assignment. The individual methods, whether in the analytical or design part, are determined correctly. The use of these methods is not the same in all cases, especially in the analytical part, it would be necessary to also perform quantification in the analyses. I praise the use of a quantitative approach. In that case, I would also recommend statistical processing. | |
| Schopnost interpretovat dosažené výsledky a vyvozovat z nich závěry | A | The student demonstrated the ability to interpret the achieved results and draw appropriate conclusions from them. The relevance between the analytical and design parts of the thesis can be demonstrated. | |
| Praktická využitelnost výsledků | B | The results of the thesis can be used in practice in a specific company with some limitations. Some passages would need to be further developed for practice. | |
| Struktura práce, použitá terminologie a odborná jazyková úroveň | B | The structure of the thesis is correct, as are the procedures and methods used. In terms of formality, the thesis does not comply with the Dean's guidelines for final theses in some parts. | |
| Práce s informačními zdroji | B | The thesis contains a list of references. The student worked with and cited the sources in the thesis text. Some of the citations do not fully comply with ISO 690. |
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